Shaun Arnold has got it right.On question 18 That is the question Buzz was talking about.Where he told you.You needed to right your love story.What you will need to do.Is answear question 18 briefly.Then at the bottom of.Question 18 in the answear space.write see attachments.Then you will right the love story on a separate piece of paper. See my example.
Example= I was searching the profiles on
www.blossoms.com on May 18 2009.(Insert blossoms business address here)I seen Peggy Sue's profile.( Shaun here you need to put Peggy's real Chinese name) And I contacted her on May 19 2009.We wrote letters to each other everyday for the next 2 weeks. on June 2 2009 we had are first web cam Chat.On June 3 2009 we started talking on web cams 2 times a day.Once in the mourning and once at night.
On April 16 2010 I flew to China to meet Peggy Sue.We spent the next 20 days.Getting to know each other and traveling in China.( insert dates and cities you visited while on this trip to China and how many days you spent in each city.) On may 2 of 2009. I arrived back in the United states.As soon as I arrived back at my home.I contacted Peggy .And we resumed the web cam chats 2 times a day.One in the mourning and one in the night.Each Web cam chat lasted about. 2 hours.
On June 15 I travelled back to China,To spend some more time with(Shaun again do not use Peggy as the name.Use her Chinese name) .Peggy and I spent 30 days together. We Went (insert date and cities visited) on July 10.I asked Peggy to be my wife.She said yes.So now Peggy and myself are planning are wedding.I arrived back in the United States on July 18.And the first thing I did when i got to my home was contacted Peggy and told her I arrived home.Since the day I came home.We have Ben talking on web cam 2 times a day.And I have another trip planed to China on Aug.15 2010.
OK Shaun do you see what I did here? I established the basic relationship.I walked the reader threw the first days.And I showed attention to detail. I.E Names and dates of Cities in China that you would of visited.I showed a on going relationship.After I had came home.If you sent gifts to Peggy you.Need to include that.the date is was mailed and what it was.
Basically you need a story that flows together.( I know in my example the dates are not even close to right.But you get the idea)Under no circumstances should you use the name Peggy anywhere in the letter.You do not want to create any confusion.About who you are trying to sponser the visa for.I would suggest you type it on the computer.Make sure the spelling and punctuation is correct.When you complete the letter take it to a notary and have them notarize it.You will need to sign the letter at the notary office.Along with the date.
What this letter does is answears the question completely.If the letter is done right.This will help move the visa application along.If it is done wrong.It will throw red flags right from the start.If you want to You can pm the letter to me Arnold or Buzz.And we can tell you if it is right.Or offer suggestions to make it better.